I’ve gave it to my instructor for review. The instructor gave some feedback and want me to revise two things: first is the structure and second is include a few counter argument people might make.
1. The structure is posted in the picture.
2. For the counter arguments, just put down some argument other people might say which disagree with you. You can say others might think XXX, but I think XXX to show your argument is stronger. Make sure the entire paper contains egos, logos, and pathos that convince the reader for your argument!!! This is important.
For counter argument and for making this paper more convincing, you can search up some background info about the company and what others say about the company or the case. Just make sure you reference it. Search up thins online to help you revise, to make it more convincing.